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Infinity Train Review - TechHeart Review - Duration: 7:07.
Sorry for my voice today, I'm coming down with strep throat and a cold.
Gotta love holidays.
Today, I'll be reviewing a pilot that is actually looking to be on the up and up.
There's a good chance now that it'll become an actual show on Cartoon Network,
so I decided to give the pilot a review because I like to help fellow writers and animators out.
It's the whole reason I made TechHeart, which also was supposed to have animation tutorials, but those take forever to make.
So, Owen Dennis, this one's for you.
First, let's look at the most obvious. The visuals.
The animation is amazingly smooth, the colors can feel a little blendy at times where they're a little too alike in saturation,
but they are consistent in that the color differences aren't distracting.
The style feels… college student.
Pilots typically have a different style than the final product as the network tries to keep two of their shows from looking too much alike,
and they also want everything to be more appealing.
The style here is already appealing save for the too level saturation of the colors.
The style itself is a bit inconsistent in that if you showed me the line art for the dog and the line art for the girl,
then I wouldn't be able to tell they were from the same show.
To be fair, very few published shows have that level of consistency, so that may be a harsh criticism.
Next, I'll be looking at the audio.
There's nothing that really sticks out as wrong audio-wise other than the loud audio when the gun starts firing,
and it wasn't until I listened with audio only that I realized that there's a lot of audio deadtime, where it's quite.
When there's a lot of back-and-forth dialogue,
you definitely don't want any background noise being too distracting,
but you do want some white noise to fill in the blanks between lines.
The beginning scale car was the worst offender of audio deadtime, and a gentle mechanical whir would have easily fixed this.
Audio deadtime, I understand is a very tedious problem to solve without the background noise being too distracting,
and I may be the only person it bothers.
Really, it's so there's a sense of time passing in the audio,
the same reason why it's recommended visually that even if the foreground character is being still, not everything in a shot should be still.
Next, I'll be talking about characterization.
The amount of traits a character has should be proportionate to the length of the work, which is why in 11 minute programs,
the characters start out with a few defining traits, but when Season 2 comes along, they begin to become full-fledged,
and by season 3, they're three-dimensional.
For an 8 minute work, most of the characters are very appropriate trait-wise.
You have 1-1, who are pessimism and optimism,
and Atticus, who is the kingly hero type.
For the first 8 minutes, that's really all you need,
and exposing more traits would be a little much for an eight minute shot.
Then, however, you have Tulip.
She is discovering herself throughout this episode, which feels like a little much for eight minutes.
In 22 minutes, sure, you could probably have some character development, but 8 minutes is just too short of an amount of time.
As far as tone and mood go (and for my audience, tone is what the work is feeling, and mood is what the audience is supposed to feel),
I'm guessing the mood is supposed to be mysterious for the most part,
but I don't pick up on mystery, so that's kinda a fault on my side.
Tone, however, tone can seem to change a little too quickly.
I can't figure out when Tulip is scared or joking around, when things are intense or lighthearted,
and faking an anti-climax is just… doesn't do it for me.
At times, because of this, Tulip seems less like a character, and more of a catalyst.
Comedic timing is good, but I'm gonna be honest with you, My Dude.
It took me three times to watch this short all the way through.
The fart car joke was just so out of place, and the voice actor didn't even seem to want to say the word fart,
like it was just shoveled in there.
The first time I saw this pitch, I stopped watching the moment they said fart car,
the second time, I stopped watching the moment they entered the fart car and it turns out it was real,
the third time, I finally gave it a full shot, and yeah, getting through the cheap, shoed in fart joke was worth it,
but there was no reason for it to be there.
It doesn't fit at all with the rest of the jokes.
The Corgi jokes were good though, and the comedy of 1-1 being such a foil of themself.
So, on a technical level, this short holds up a lot better than most other pilots,
and on a personal level, I like this pilot better than most published cartoons.
I'm not really a mystery person, like that aspect of Gravity Falls was kinda lost on me,
but even with that, the main aspect of this show,
and the genre of cartoon that there's a really big market for right now,
it's still a decent show to me.
I mean, as a first episode, this would stand out to me worlds more than the big big shows like Steven Universe.
I mean, this is on par with Avatar: The Last Airbender's first episode,
where it doesn't dick around for the eight minutes. And I respect the hell out of that.
Please, make this a show, Cartoon Network.
Not only is there a gigantic market for mystery right now,
but even to someone like me that's just not at all turned on to mystery, it's enjoyable.
I'd like to see Tulip a little more defined, but other than that, it's already show-ready.
It's got great animators, good audio mixing
(and I know I complained about that earlier, but it's actually really good, as I said, I had to turn off the visual and focus on only the audio to catch deadtime),
it has good writing, all it needs is a more defined protagonist and maybe some color upgrades,
and you have got yourself hopefully something that's on par or better than the other shows of the Cartoon Golden Age
like Adventure Time, Steven Universe, Gravity Falls, Wander Over Yonder.
Hell, Dog, usually I get sick of even things I like like El Tigre when I do these reviews
because I have to watch them over and over, but this?
I didn't get sick of it. Not remotely.
Well, okay, I feel dread before the guns blaze because it's loud, and yeah, I don't like that the first joke is Fart Car,
which may have worked if it wasn't literally the first joke,
but I'm not sick of this episode.
It has marketing potential. It has merit.
And, with all the re-runs of complete failures to show critics like Teen Titans Go, you could really use some more merit.
Something to fill the hole that Adventure Time's inevitable downfall left.
This is is.
This was a TechHeart Review,
and I still don't know how to end videos.
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Cleft grafting Bougainvillea - Duration: 6:07.
For cleft grafting I start with preparing the section to be grafted, its always better to have at least 2 to 3 bud in the section
I already sterilize my grafting blade by heating it, you can do that with dilute sanitizer too
I will choose carefully the target branch to match the thickness of the section
make sure the grafting section is grafted in correct direction to the target branch you can check that by observing the direction of the leafs and thorn of both part
then make a sharp cut to the section to create a V shape design in the end of the section. the cut should be almost 2.5 Cm or more
here I have once again sterilised my tools just to show how it can be done by heat
Then Make a cut in the centre of the target branch by pushing the blade back and forth it should be a bit longer than the length of the V shape cut in section
then push the section into the target branch carefully
sorry for some reason the video is jumping
Then i will wrap it tightly with the electrical tape ( the grafting tape is recommended but it is not available in my place but the electrical tape similarly had good results )
I have sealed the head of section with candle paraffin ( grafting wax is recommended but it is not available in my place in coming video i will show how grafting wax can be made in home )
then I cover grafting with clear plastic to prevent it from drying out , be careful and check the plastic for moisture, as it can also rotten the graft ( I had that bad experience with mango grafting )
as you can see there is some moisture inside the bag so it is good to remove the bag if you observe that
as you can see both buds start growing and the craft joint is almost healed
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Five Little Monkeys | English Rhymes For Children | Kindergarten Songs - Duration: 3:18.
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Five little monkeys jumping on the bed
One fell off and bumped his head
So Momma called the doctor and the doctor said
No more monkeys jumping on the bed!
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Four little monkeys jumping on the bed
One fell off and bumped his head
So Momma called the doctor and the doctor said
No more monkeys jumping on the bed.
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Three little monkeys jumping on the bed
One fell off and bumped his head
So Momma called the doctor and the doctor said
No more monkeys jumping on the bed!
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Two little monkeys jumping on the bed
One fell off and bumped his head
So Momma called the doctor and the doctor said
No more monkeys jumping on the bed!
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One little monkey jumping on the bed
He fell off and bumped his head
So Momma called the doctor and the doctor said
No more monkeys jumping on the bed.
No little monkeys jumping on the bed
None fell off and bumped his head
So Momma called the doctor and the doctor said
Put those monkeys back in bed!
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DIY Furby, plastic bottle toy (ENG Subtitles) - Speed up #298 - Duration: 3:44.
Hi. Today I will show you how to make Furby made from plastic bottle.
I made it by request from my viewers.
We need:
...paper tape...
...scissors...
...plastic bottle...
...tissue paper...
...pencil...
...glue...
...and colored paper.
Cut off a part of the bottle.
Cut off the center part of bottle.
Check if parts fit.
Cut off a neck of bottle.
Connect the parts.
Wrap the connection by using paper tape.
Wrap bottom part of the bottle.
Wrap the bottle by using a piece of tissue paper.
Glue the edges.
Cut a strip of tissue paper.
Make incisions on one edge of strip.
Glue the strip to the bottle. Start from bottom.
Each row should be 2-3 mm higher than previous one.
Wrap entire bottle.
Glue the strip on the top to hide the hole.
Cut 2 ears from tissue paper.
Take other tissue paper and cut 2 smaller ears.
Glue smaller ear to the bigger ear.
Roll up the edge.
Glue ears to bottle.
Cut eyes from blue paper.
Next, cut 2 white circles.
Cut 2 smaller black circles.
Cut 2 small white dots.
Cut forelock from black paper.
Cut mouth from orange paper.
Cut lips from black paper.
Glue all the pieces together.
Glue them to the bottle.
Finally, cut 2 paws from blue paper.
Glue them from bottom.
And it's done.
Furby is a really nice toy.
You can make it with help of kids. That can be a great fun for them.
Please give a like to this video and subscribe to my channel. Thanks for watching!
Bye bye.
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My Wish For You - Duration: 1:49.
My wish for you...
Comfort
on difficult days
Smiles
when sadness intrudes
Rainbows
to follow the clouds
Laughter
to kiss your lips
Sunsets
to warm your heart
Hugs
when spirits sag
Beauty
for your eyes to see
Friendship
to brighten your being
Confidence
for when you doubt
Faith
so that you can believe
Courage
to know yourself
Patience
to find the truth
Love
to complete your life
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I'M BACK!?! - Duration: 2:23.
know stuff like that --
and, um --
my mouth, again . . . this I know, cause of dentists
Nickelback, and my favorite song by them is Follow You Home
Ahh (ahh)
WHAT'S HAPPENING
Hey guys, it's Kharma
aand yes, I am back. I just got a laptop a few hours ago
Because today's Christmas (my parents coughing in the background) as you can see
But you won't be seeing this till, um, New Year's
So Merry Christmas, Happy New Year, Happy Hanukkah
Just, Happy Holidays! Whatever it is you celebrate :)
If you don't celebrate at all, hello, I'm Kharma, I celebrate
But uhm,
I'm still figuring everything out on this laptop
so it might not look great
like, it might look choppy
a little bit
But I'm still figuring everything out
Hopefully I'll, like, get it to look better
But uhm,
Yeh heh
Oh! That light actually works. I didn't know that.
I'm goooonna leave this . . . on that!
Looks pretty good
But uhm
Yes! I'm back. I will be making more videos soon
I just tried to record one of
me playing don't 'S' your pants
But it was just lagging really bad
But I hope that I'm gonna -- I hope that I can fix that
And I'm gonna try to
But yeah!
So I just wanted to let you guys know I'm back
And I'm gonna be making more videos!
So yeah
Thank you for watching
If you like this video of me talking
Feel free to hit the like button
Just donate your thumbs
And if you aren't subscribed yet, please subscribe, it would mean the world to me
And I try to record and post at least once a week
I don't -- I haven't really set a day, I'm thinking of just posting on Sundays
But, I might not be able to do that every Sunday
But I'll try to
So yeah, thank you for watching
Love you guys, bye!
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